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Post by Nienna Greenleaf of Mirkwood on Sept 6, 2006 17:01:16 GMT -6
Yes, and do remember that it was you who created it, not me or Ali or Nen, or...or...or... ;D
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Post by Galuwen on Sept 9, 2006 10:01:09 GMT -6
OK guys. I need someone to write a scene. It's one of many moments for you guys to help out. Someone who can write a good aftermath, where everyone is dealing with what has happened in their own ways. If you want to, please post here. Then I will let you know when to add it.
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Post by Nienna Greenleaf of Mirkwood on Sept 13, 2006 18:57:40 GMT -6
Oooooooo go Nienna! Yeah! Show this Eru guy what it feels like to have a sword pointed at his throat, ready to RIP! ;D If this is the guy that my character falls in love with, I think that it would be amusing if I downright despise him first. ;D That adds to the fun.
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Post by Lady Greywings on Sept 19, 2006 16:08:44 GMT -6
I'm loving how the story is turning out!! you write very well Galuwen. I haven't been able to check back as often as I'd like because of school, but it makes it all the better since there's usually more to read the longer I take. also, if my character is a bother to upkeep she can be booted out
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Post by Galuwen on Sept 23, 2006 16:07:21 GMT -6
Never a bother. I am trying to giving everyone bigger parts. Trust me you will step forward in the story.
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Post by Nienna Greenleaf of Mirkwood on Sept 25, 2006 18:09:37 GMT -6
I really liked this last part, Gal. I love imagery, and I could see everything here...
Your choice of wording gives it a foreboding factor, and I can tell that time has slightly slowed down to allow evil to take hold. And the wind is held prison, just like a person would be. NICE!!
It's good to know Reverent Shadow's real reason for turning bad. He wasn't always that way, so there may still be some good left that hasn't been killed, but right now we don't know that. And what better reason to hate than to avenge his wife's death?
I CAN SEE IT!!! I LIKE!! Foreboding...until we come to the mound where his wife lays in her eternal rest...
Things are looking good! Keep it up!! ;D
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Post by Lady Elianna Tar-Minyatur on Sept 27, 2006 20:48:06 GMT -6
*laughs*
What she said. In my not-so-smart version lol.
Bravo ;D
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Post by Nienna Greenleaf of Mirkwood on Oct 8, 2006 8:26:01 GMT -6
Oooo!! A spirit animal!! I LIKE!!!
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Post by Nienna Greenleaf of Mirkwood on Oct 12, 2006 20:54:43 GMT -6
hehe Galuwen's becoming so powerful! And it seems as if she's no longer on the side of good...
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Post by Galuwen on Oct 12, 2006 23:27:38 GMT -6
*evil grin*
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Post by Lady Greywings on Oct 15, 2006 15:28:03 GMT -6
I feel scared for Nim and Arianna xD they seem powerless
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Post by Nienna Greenleaf of Mirkwood on Oct 15, 2006 19:23:37 GMT -6
Yeah, unless something drastic happens soon, they're in trouble...
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Post by arianna on Nov 26, 2006 19:22:49 GMT -6
tell me about it..
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Post by Galuwen on Dec 7, 2006 0:25:19 GMT -6
I have been working on it. I want to get alot wriiten before I post it so you guys will have a lot to read.
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Post by Nienna Greenleaf of Mirkwood on Dec 7, 2006 13:30:28 GMT -6
Oooooo can't wait to see it! ;D
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